http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJilp8zlMWg
This is a very rough draft, I am still doing a lot of editing and half the video is not in. The concept of someone you love disappearing.
Also, thoughts on if there should be no sound or a quiet song playing. At the end when she wakes up it will be audio of her actual surroundings so I want the dream state to either be quiet or have a song so that they have a big difference and showcases the difference of dream and reality but I am not sure of no sound or a song yet.
I am also thinking about slowing it down so there are less frames per second so that it doesn't go by so fast.
I think so far you have done an excellent job capturing everything! I really like how you showed your feet while you were walking...it works really well. I think you should definitely slow it down, right now its hard to focus on whats happening because its going so fast. I think your idea would come across a lot stronger if it were slower. I also like that there is no sound. Unless you find the perfect song or background noise I think it could take away from what you are going for. I'm really excited to see the end product!
ReplyDeleteYou know I think if you are going to post a song it has to be strong enough to make you feel the picture even more but it shouldn't over power the video. For some reason I think of "ain't no sunshine when it rains"
ReplyDeleteI think this is really good, it flows very well. I like how you are portraying a sense of emptiness or loss. It will be hard to pick a song, but I think it might be interesting!
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